Simple sentences

In music we were learning how to write descriptive sentences. We started with a boring sentence and turned into something amazing here are my sentences.

The sentences go from worst to best.
The music was loud.
The melody was deafening.
The melody started at 10:00 pm and was deafening.
In the club the melody started at 10:00 pm and was deafening.
In the club the beautiful melody started at 10:00 pm and was deafening.
In the boys club the beautiful melody started at 10:00 pm and was deafening.

It was really fun to think of these different things and was quite difficult to do which made it even more fun.