Small person Big problem

Today Miss Birtch showed us how to write a good 4 paragraph story.

Plummeting below the rocks cracked and the trees blew. To the left of my vision was a clear sky making glistening water below. When I looked down the water was shining while being moved by human inventions. I felt my thin amount of hair blow than I heard my full name "Martin the mischievous mouse".

I turned around and started walking with my tail following I went further and further into my abode. 

My mother had given me these brown comfortable boots. My mother made me go to work as the local cheese taster for the cheese factory. I did that and then had to get some water from the dreaful world above me.

I finished my cheese tasting and then had to try not to get killed getting water. I had to take 3 bottles and fill them up at the water fountain above our house. I grabbed the bottles and slowly made my way toward it then I heard the sound of something big and scary. A really big scooter almost hit me when I was crossing the road. I dreaded the next 2 roads I had to cross but dreaded coming back with 3 heavy bottles of water.

I took all three bottles of water across the first 2 with ease. I then had to get the 3 bottles across the final street. The first bottle I got across safely and the second I got across safely. I almost got stepped on when getting to the third bottle but I did. I grabbed the last bottle of water and started moving but I looked to my right and then...